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APR 22, 2020 • 5 min read
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1. Lacking specificity.
If you select a specific moment in which you considered one of the questions you mentioned above, aim to show what was happening instead of telling us all the time. Describe the setting, the gestures, the interactions, and the particulars of the experience as though it were television.
2. Pretending to be perfect.
If you write an entire essay about how you rose above the errors of your friends, it will be easy for any reader to disbelieve you; the errors you have made are part of the learning experiences that you can explore with candour.
3. Bragging about your accomplishments.
It’s wonderful if you are exceptionally talented! But if the goal of your essay is simply to tell the reader about how good you are, that does not show a great deal of the insight and humility needed to be in a classroom collaborating with other people when you get to college.
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4. Forgetting the narrative.
Your story should have a clear beginning, middle, and end. Try to focus on an experience from your life that is meaningful to you, then what you learned from that experience over time, and now looking back, why what you learned matters to you.
5. Leaving it until too late
Get started early! The average student spends three months working on their Common App essay. You might end up writing more than five drafts in order to figure out how best to tell your story. It’s important to read your essay out loud to people close to you or give them copies to get their feedback on what you might do differently.
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