Why Most College Essays Fail to Impress Admissions Officers.
Written by:
Lauren P.
Head of Application Essay Mentoring
Through her essay mentorship, Lauren has helped students uncover their unique voice and gain admission to every Ivy League and other top universities. She’s known for drawing out authentic, powerful stories that make applications unforgettable.
Perfect grades and impressive activities may open the door, but they rarely seal the deal. In the most selective applicant pools, the essay often tips the balance. It is the only place in the application where an admissions officer can hear a student’s authentic voice, see how they think, and glimpse the perspective that sets them apart. In this eBook, Lauren reveals the 5 mistakes that trip up even the strongest students and how to avoid them. Her guidance shows how to turn a draft into a narrative that feels honest, distinctive, and impossible to ignore.
Key Takeaways:
- Don’t rehash your résumé. The essay isn’t about repeating achievements but about revealing who you are.
- Go beyond what’s already in your application. Use the essay to explain the why behind the what.
- Depth beats breadth. One story told with detail has more impact than a dozen crammed together.
- Clichés kill connection. Specific, lived details make even ordinary moments feel original.
- Show who you’re becoming. The best essays reveal growth, empathy, and perspective — not just polish.
As seen in
Download Now
Complete the form below to get this free e-book.