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NOV 17, 2019 • 5 min read
With the average GPA of admitted applicants at 3.9, the average ACT score at 33, and the average SAT score at 1510, nailing the application essay is what can set you a part from a competitive pool of applicants.
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Successful students at Johns Hopkins make the biggest impact by collaborating with others, including peers, mentors, and professors. Talk about a time, in or outside the classroom, when you worked with others and what you learned from the experience.
The most important element to creating an effective essay in response to this prompt is to make it personal. Pick a moment or experience that you remember well; this will allow you to include details which will make your writing more vivid and profound.
The first step here is to choose the moment or experience carefully. Remember, it needs to demonstrate how you work with others as well as how you learn from others. Maybe you are one of the Yearbook editors and had to coordinate an entire team of photographers, all of whom had different opinions of you and your work. How did you communicate with people that didn’t like you? What did you learn about your leadership style? What did you learn about yourself as a team player?
Or maybe you work at a restaurant and have a close relationship with your manager. How did this relationship come to be? How often do you talk to this person, and about what? Why do you think they have taken you under their wing and what does it mean to you? What have you learned from this person?
Again, it is important that your example is personal and from the heart.
Be sure to also include at least a few concluding sentences about how you will take what you learned from this experience to your time at John Hopkins. The admissions committee wants to know what about the university in particular draws you to it and how it will help you succeed, so don’t be afraid to include specific opportunities that align with your topic.
Lastly, let a friend or family member to look over your essay to make sure there are no grammar or spelling errors.
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